Ok i have a lot of people to manage but i have a list of all of you. it would be a great help though if you guys could become my follower(if you are a feature writer) and then comment this message and tell me what you want to write about and later i will sort you out. happy writing!
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Dear Editor Person,
Im pretty sure i want to write about movies, big and small. thanks, and letting me do that would be great. Thanks!!!
Hi Bug,
You already know what I am writing- my passion... video games...
ok,~iruoros gail~, considering that you are the first person to comment me, you get first pick. So i will let you do movies but you have to find a partner first. Can't find one and i'll assign you someone, ok?
Hey Miranda! Some of the writers put what they wanted to do in their apps. They may want to change, but here are their basics.
Not sure about spelling...
Laniya-Fashion
Nah-Jay-Music
Aleks-Comics
I think that's it for now.
Reilly
Ok people it istime to change your music move on to the newest groves. Trust it will saticfy you. one of the newest songs is spotlight sungby jennifer hudson.i personnally beleive it willbe a grammy.another thing is one ofthe very know singers is coming out agaig brandy,it has been a while since she has had a new song about three years so look forward to hearindthe best songs ever
1st, This is what you wear when your;:
~Going to prom if you're wearing:
-Gold: wear it with a purple or black
-Green: this is a hard one but I got it, wear it with a gold, black or very light pink.
-Pink: a black, white, red, gold , gray , purple ,or brown
-Black: everything obviously!
~Going to or having a Party:
-Laid back; light blue jeans && a nice bright shirt with matching or going together shoes.
2nd;
Fashion
Alright then I think that two colors on top of each for ex. Pink on pink [pink shirt and pink pants] are not that appealing just except for the color black and gray. Other than those two everything else is hard to find an exact match. If you like two colors make them match. Neon colors look nice with a normal dark color. Some colors need to be in a pattern. Make sure you have the same amount of each color or pretty close. YOU MUST be careful when trying to wear more then 3 colors. Only one neon color all of the other colors must be normal. Of course black and white go with everything so don’t be plain! Give it some SPICE. Personally I love light colored jeans. They look brilliant with everything.
ok, i cannot fish editing this article becuz it is not confusing but it is not a satisfacory article. if u could put it into a paragraph format that would be good.
Ok people it is time to change your music move onto the newest groves. Trust me, it will satisfy you.One of the newest songs, sung by Jeniffer Hudson. Another thing is one of the very well-known singers is coming back out. Guess who it is! Brandy! It has been a while since she has had a new song for about three years so look forward to hearing some of the best music ever!
Ok Najee(sorry if i spelled it wrong) i read your article and so far it is pretty good but there are a few mistakes. It has a few spots that are not capitalized, there are a few spelling errors and you forgot to space in the first sentence. Also, it is pretty short, so if i were you i would try to get some more facts to lengthen it. Keep working!
To sam,(or Whoever wrote it, its edited)
1st, This is what you wear when your;:
~Going to prom if you're wearing:
-Gold: wear it with a purple or black
-Green: this is a hard one but I got it, wear it with a gold, black or very light pink.
-Pink: a black, white, red, gold , gray , purple ,or brown
-Black: everything obviously!
~Going to or having a Party:
-Laid back; light blue jeans && a nice bright shirt with matching or going together shoes.
Response: Ok Whoever wrote this, pretty good, but it needs something. Grammer and all of that is good but it is kind of boring. It needs a little more information, a little more thought in each comment, good start though. (i will do the second part later)
1st, This is what you wear when your;:
So everyone always has a problem wit figuring out what goes with what right?
Just to make your life a little bit easier I’ve done some for you!
I didn’t know what styles people like in clothing so I just wrote colors.
I truly hope you take my advice into your closet.
-Going to prom if you're wearing:
-Gold: wear it with a purple or black
-Green: this is a hard one but I got it, wear it with a gold, black or very light pink.
-Pink: a black, white, red, gold, gray, purple, or brown
-Black: everything obviously!
-Going to or having a Party:
-Laid back; light blue jeans && a nice bright shirt with matching or going together shoes.
This is my favorite. I just use this selection a lot. I like to look dressed up without dressing up.
t-shirts and jeans with flip flops is the usual.
Hey there this is your music features reporter naz-jee , i am back! first thing is first i would like to introduce the newset member of music features Milan preston! she is going to be a lot of things similur to mine but i will be better. the newest song of the day is whatever you like by T.I. WE ARE TALKING NUMBER ONE HIT HERE PEOPLE. he is taking his career to a new level and to see the video go to WWW.Bet.com GRAMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY is soo coming your way.
1st, This is what you wear when your;:
So everyone always has a problem wit figuring out what goes with what right?
Just to make your life a little bit easier I’ve done some for you!
I didn’t know what styles people like in clothing so I just wrote colors.
I truly hope you take my advice into your closet.
-Going to prom if you're wearing:
-Gold: wear it with a purple or black
-Green: this is a hard one but I got it, wear it with a gold, black or very light pink.
-Pink: a black, white, red, gold, gray, purple, or brown
-Black: everything obviously!
-Going to or having a Party:
-Laid back; light blue jeans && a nice bright shirt with matching or going together shoes.
This is my favorite. I just use this selection a lot. I like to look dressed up without dressing up.
t-shirts and jeans with flip flops is the usual.
Response: For a first draft it is very good, I don't see any spelling issues or anything. I think it is fine as it is, but when you go to do your final draft, i would give more reason as to why you said what you said.
-keep it up!!!
Hey there this is your music features reporter naz-jee , I am back! First thing is first i would like to introduce the newset member of music features Milan preston! She is going to be a lot of things similer to mine but I will be better. The newest song of the day is whatever you like by T.I. WE ARE TALKING NUMBER ONE HIT HERE PEOPLE. he is taking his career to a new level and to see the video go to WWW.Bet.com GRAMMYYYYYYYYYY is soo coming your way!
Response: Very good, very up-beat, I like it. I did make a few changes though. Nothing big of course, just a few capitals. It is good for a rough draft, but when you do the final, Talk about more than just one song and singer. Other than that it was very good.
-keep it up!
Deep and Dark and Dangerous
Book By: Mary Downing Hahn
Review By: Greta
This suspenseful ghost story by Mary Downing Hahn is about a 13 year old girl, Aly, and she spends the summer at a family vacation house in Maine. Her aunt offers to take her while she works on her art and Aly looks after her 4 year old cousin Emma. Aly’s mother protests that she hated the lake when she was a kid but ever since Aly found the picture of her mom, aunt and some other girl, but she was cut out of the picture. Ever since then, Aly want to investigate.
Aly pleads and her mother grants her promotion to go. Her aunt comes with Emma and they go to the mysterious house on the lake. When they get there, everything seems normal until one day when Aly takes Emma to the beach. They meet this girl Sissy. Sissy is very rude and mean to both Aly and Emma but since Sissy is the only friend Emma has, Emma becomes the same way. She is constantly having temper tantrums and being mean and rude, just like Sissy.
Emma worships Sissy. Until one day, Sissy takes it way too far. During this adventure, Aly uncovers the mystery of the girl who was cut out of the photograph.
--Hey culd u edit this so i can too. i have to wait for u to edit it then after u do i will then we can send it to reilly. thanks.
-----Sam S.
Hey.... um..... i was thinking that i could may be schedule a meeting with the editor and co-editor on-line. as you know, i am sick, but can talk to you on my blog named 'meeting'. that would be great. we can schedule it for 2:20 on thursday, september 25th. thanks! i'll make that blog right now!!!
Darian
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